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Wow, that was really cool. I like how you portrayed death different then the normal, stereotypical black and horror ect. And that's totally true at the end how you siad death should be the last thing that you see so it should be beautiful. I like it! :D

I noticed one spelling mistake, but other than that this was an interesting idea. :)

Katie.

Awe!

Wow, posted so long ago, lucky me for deciding to go back to the 340th page! I loved the story, i like all your stories but i think its a pity there is only three here.

I love the concept, i think it would make a great short film or comic. Anyway i loved it and i hope you see this.

oh! okay... i see how you're doing this... in different stories.. okay... cool...

I really really enjoyed both your takes on death, and I really really wish you would write some more...

ok! good stories both of them...but since they're about the same people and one of these aren't a sequel...maybe you should think about putting them together or something ok?
but other than that...THESE ARE GREAT! I WANT TO READ MORE DUDE!

Oh cool so there was another bit. This sounds a bit like a prequel. You know when Emily met death. after that they would become friends and she'd end up in the councillers office.

A nice grim reaper! I like it!

Oooooh. Very different from take one, and yet...similar. I like this too. Very much.

Okay, so you have. You still rock.

i like take one better, though this one is good, too. i might have missed some, though, cuz my omp has that big 'illegal operation' thing in the middle. i didn't do anything illegal! anyway, that obscured some of the story.

Comments? Well, I loved it, and i agree with your belief. Very good.