Reviews for Just A Spark
Madcow13 chapter 36 . 5/2/2005
Aw, finally born. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update ASAP.
Marianna5 chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
Wow, what great stuff we have going on here! I'm glad that you separated Gwen and Keith for a while. They needed their relationship to grow. And I'm happy to see that Keith isn't as perfect as we thought him to be! I can't believe Gwen went into labor at a park...! Excellent writing. Can't wait for more.
Close Your Eyes and Dream chapter 36 . 5/1/2005
Aww...a little girl...
notdapunkprincess chapter 36 . 5/1/2005
is that the end? this is a REALLY REALLY good chapter. good job!
Nyte Shade chapter 3 . 5/1/2005
Great story i am loving it im not done yet but keep writing
Madcow13 chapter 35 . 4/28/2005
You changed it! Or perhaps Keith isn't telling her everything. Well, I got the unexpected ending (well, it isn't over yet, is it?) so I should be complaining. I loved the chapters and I feel sorry for Kim. I wonder if we will ever find out who was the father: whether it was Keith or not. You might have made it obvious... but I miss things like that. ;D Anyway, update again as soon as you can.
bev chapter 35 . 4/28/2005
yay! keith is finally back and just in time for her water to i loved this chapter hun.. it had so much raw emotion in it and it got me a little teary-eyed but i'm glad you got the two of them back together.. keep writing hun and i hope you get this story finished soon-bev
Close Your Eyes and Dream chapter 33 . 4/27/2005
This is a great story! And I cannot believe that deal! Hey, can you make a little twist? Like...another guy and Gwen and then Keith comes back and all that stuff? I think that would be AWESOME! But then...not many people will like it huh?...Oh well...UPDATE SOON!
hannah chapter 33 . 4/24/2005
Is that the end? please dont let it be the end :( i love your story keep going please
Madcow13 chapter 33 . 4/24/2005
Drama with a captial D. I sort of wish I hadn't read your other stories now because I know what is going to happen... But I couldn't resist... lol. Anyway, update as soon as you can.
crazedmonkeysmiles chapter 32 . 4/23/2005
whats up with ur author alerts? they're really annoying me. newayzz, update soon.
Madcow13 chapter 31 . 4/22/2005
A little short, but good all the same. Keith is so sweet. I can't believe Gwen is still refusing him... Anyway, we've still got a good bit of drama left to come haven't we? From what I've seen of the sequels (that you say not to read until you've revised them) there is anyway. But you might decide to change that... or you might not...

Uh, yeah, anyway, I'm rambling now. Basically great chapter and get the next one out as soon as you can.
Marianna5 chapter 31 . 4/21/2005
Aw, so sweet! I have a bad feeling about Warren though. It feels like he's still not accepting Gwen's pregnancy. I wonder if he'll do something? You have great talent for describing internal emotions and dialogue. They bring the story to life! Please post more soon. _
notdapunkprincess chapter 30 . 4/1/2005
aww keith is SO sweet
crazedmonkeysmiles chapter 29 . 3/28/2005
i love this chapter too. good job! it over?
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