Reviews for Pain
Dying Rose chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
Cool! Tons of verb usage, makes me feel it more. Like it lots.
shawn4542 chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Wow...now that was the icing on the cake. It was so good. I really feel this poem. In fact i've got watery eyes now that i'm holding back. You just described everything i've been feeling. Wow...that's just all i can say. I know exactly how you feel. It does hurt and i'm sorry. keep your head up girl. Out here in illinois i feel trapped some times and that just brought all that out on top of other things, but hey good job.
KM Barringer chapter 1 . 2/7/2004
There is no way to numb the pain, we must face it and move on, stay strong, and never surrender yourself to those who have wounded you. Stay alive. Live your life to the fullest, never minding the hurt. Because if you ignore it, and never dwell on it again, one day you'll never feel it again. One day you'll be free of the pain and lies and deciet. Then, and only then, will you stop your search for a cure, and begin a search for the future only you can provide yourself with.