Reviews for leaving
Razor Sharp Kisses chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
O_O Hearing this murmured would be a chilling serenade. I really like this. I love your style and how you use the same word more than once in a row. It's so depressing yet beautiful. The words flow nicely into the lines, and the lines form the perfect sentences. It's quite melodic; a lovely little cadence. Almost as if an ode to death/un-death. Am I making sense?
BeyondRepair chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
chills...thats what this gave me, chills. I'm sorry for whatever loss you've had. This poem has sapped the strength from my limbs. Good work, although I'm sorry you wrote it, or that you ever felt the need to.
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
Thanks for your review and welcome to the freak club, you're a member now.. or wait, you always have been P LOL weirdness is good... oh, and I love this poem. I think it's one of your best and I'm sorry I never got to read it sooner hehe. The words look simple but the emotions run so deep -sigh- so nicely done.
Jenna xx