Reviews for Lonely Cloud
deepdown chapter 1 . 2/24/2004
ooh... very good imagery, really. bravo
Ukiah chapter 1 . 2/21/2004
Short and nice.
I like the symbolism, it sort of states how for some there is never complete happiness. You can always ignore that lone cloud that does nothing or you can focus on it and forget about the big picture.
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 2/20/2004
awesome. what i really loved about this poem was that its whole atmosphere changed in different degrees throughout. like at first its all light and happy and such...but then it slowly grows darker with the tainting of the white cloud. very nice, work, kudos!
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 2/18/2004
Ah, that was such a lovely image... Thank you for this, it made my heart lighter.
Lina Inverse chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
Beautiful imagery
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
Quite an image.
BranwenEithne chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
I always feel sad for thos clouds even thought i find them beautiful...great poem.
Lady Saleci Loramma chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
I can really imagine the scene that you create. Great piece.
-LSL
twilightwriter07 chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
Awesome imagery here. I wish it was summer right about now. _
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
Very well done. I usually don't enjoy haikus unless they're desriptive. But this is so beautiful, the imagery about the sky. VERY nice job you've done here.
Jenna xx
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
Nice.
Emi Amara chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
Hiya! Good poem, i like the lil note at the end aswell! Well done
cya )
*WG