|Reviews for Untitled in Olde English|
| Ria Mala chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
Hiyo. Cool! I like the Olde English. That was a creative idea. It kinda has a cool rythm to it that way.
| emizulu chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
okie, heres the translation:
Line 1: the family the baby was born into
Line 2: will kill him
Line 3: and when the baby is dead
Line 4: the family's geed that once was unnoticed
Line 5: will be found out and the family shunned
Line 6: when the next child is born dead...or did they really kill that one as well?
doesn't it sound better in my version of "prose"?