That was completely...wow.. It seems so realistic- with the questions and thoughts of the subconscious mind. I really don't know what to say that isn't already said. This story captured the supposed emotion very well. You did a great job!

It was good, I liked it, sad though...

How horrible! The ending is so horrible! Not in that I thought this was a load of crap, but that it would be the worst experience one would ever have to endure. I loved this a lot, I really really did. I thought that this was really nice and incredibly written, all the questions, seeming so human and believable. It's as if you died and have come knowing what it is like. I congragulate you on this so much!