Reviews for Black Coffee
Megaroni chapter 1 . 2/9/2004
Wow. I really liked that one. Thoughtful but not overly dramatic, and the imagery really fit the words and emotions. Really, a great job. You should be proud of it.
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 2/9/2004
Wow! This is absolutly brilliant! I loved this, you really made it so, true to life.. I mean, the coffee and everything *laughs* I'm not explaining this to well, am I? This is an amazing poem!
CoolBeans18s
Teacup Majoram chapter 1 . 2/9/2004
Well written. The only thing I have to nit pick about is in line 9 the word true seems to jar the flow of the poem.