Reviews for Gone
SuperGill chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
this is really good, gives you pure emotion. ur a good writer keep it up. oh, and thanks for reviewing my poem. fictionpress messed it up. whenever there's a capital letter you're supposed to start a new paragraph. when i uploaded it i think i accidentally clicked on story format. oh well. this is a great poem, and okay this is getting really long. why am i still typing? Stop typing now! STOP IT NO-
r/r me ~~sg
Rudy1981 chapter 1 . 2/10/2004
wow,..really good! ps thanx for your review. yes, in some ways not rhyming does make things sound deeper, but then again, when you can rhyme AND have impact, it sounds way a lot better than no rhyme. unfortunately the poem you read of mine particulary sucked, others aren't the best, but i try! :-D