Reviews for Until
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
amazing poem! it's so sad, but it's very well written! great job!
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 2/10/2004
Very good! I do understand this one. We most be soul-sisters or something. .
imxnotxyourxstar chapter 1 . 2/9/2004
Terrific poem, I absolutely loved it. You conveyed the emotion in it well and it had a nice flow. My favorite lines were
"I secretly release feelings
Only for them to get torn down
I do learn from my mistakes
And the hurt that I’ve found"
I also liked the last few lines a lot as well. Beautifully written. Keep up the great work!
~Lsay312