The song is comletely stupid. It shouldn't be there.

hey, im at school so i didn't really want to sign-in. this was so cool. i think i understand it.. but i may not be correct. so i'll just leave my opinion of that part out. the last line was my fave.. the one before the song. this rocked! keep writing.. i hope all is well now.
~scars~

whoa that was really moving and touching. i don't think it needs to be any longer, fine the way it is . nice job

Nitpick: It's spelled knives.
Well done, could have delved deeper into it, actually im thinking of writing an essay on it now.