|Reviews for For Death and Glory|
| RCS chapter 7 . 4/24/2004
There was some good medeival-style battles in this story, and more promises to come. Keep it up.
| RCS chapter 6 . 4/24/2004
It's no wonder King Beckard has a rebellion on his hands. He's a bit of an SOB, isn't he.
| mizu no kokoro chapter 7 . 3/26/2004
Wow, i kinda lost trck here and there, and some parts were slightly fuzzy, but overall, it's going reli well so far~ i hope u update soon, and perhaps give me some advice on this fantasy story i'm working on? i have slight clue writing battle scenes while u seem to have it down the pat its much appreciated~ keep up the exellent work
~Never the same~
| mizu no kokoro chapter 6 . 3/26/2004
more fighting? awesome
| mizu no kokoro chapter 5 . 3/26/2004
| mizu no kokoro chapter 3 . 3/26/2004
ouch~ that has got to hurt~
| mizu no kokoro chapter 2 . 3/26/2004
lots of action huh? sorta like those medival kingdom things? the bow's a cool weapon i wanna learn how to use one :D
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
Why this military story doesn't seem to start out all that bad~~ guess i'll just have to read more :D
| jason storm chapter 7 . 3/24/2004
Good middyevil plot and nice action in all seven chapters. write more
| Goner chapter 4 . 3/4/2004
The story is really picking up :)
You have me on the edge of my seat patiently waiting for more. I can't offer any criticism (I didn't really see anything wrong) but I hope you get another chapter up soon.
| RCS chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
I like a good fantasy tale, and this chapter is a nice introduction to the setting.
Apparently King Beckard went to the Darth Vader School of Leadership, judging by how he deals with a subordinate's failure :)
"Apology accepted, Captain Needa."
| plane stupid chapter 2 . 2/21/2004
| EMILYYYYYY chapter 1 . 2/20/2004
WOOHOO! nice story! a wee gory but IMAGINITIVE! hehe I REVIEWED A STORY!
| Mbwun chapter 1 . 2/15/2004
Holy hell! The arrow through the ankle made me cringe... I just have something about wounds in the feet. Anyhew... Pain is implied by Kardoc's reactions, which, I suppose, is more subtle than flat-out describing it, but still, you might've mentioned something.
Ah, yes, the time-honored bad guy tradition of slaughtering He Who Pisses Me Off...:)
~He Who Walks On All Fours
| Colorado Kid chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
LOL This looks brilliant. Raw yet not gratuitous. Realistic yet it doesn't bum you out...
I look forward to more. I'm glad you enjoy Officer Oro, she's sure to bloom and prosper in no time at all, so be sure to check back for more...