Reviews for I Could Only Stare
The Postscript chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
It is a pattern in your writing to reserve the last two lines. The rest of this, besides, describes in what way you stared. Similar to the way a friend might ask you to compliment her on her dress. One would choose their words very carefully and phrase their response in a delicate way. This clarification of so many interpretations to choose from. Keep writing, k.
Toph Gonzalez chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
I feel for you bro...
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
I like this one too even though its sad. You draw this picture with the ease of a painter's hand.
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
*tear* that is so sad, but so very well written! bravo!
FrostedTeardrop chapter 1 . 2/11/2004
This was a great poem. Short, but staright to the point, I could just picture it. Great work!
dead hopes chapter 1 . 2/11/2004
very true, i like the use of the word hidden )
Ara Cale chapter 1 . 2/11/2004
I like it... short and with nice imagery. Good job... *pats you on the head as though you are a cute little puppy*
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 2/11/2004
I like the way that you made it easy to pictue. very good.