Reviews for Alone
Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
interesting. short but sweet.
The Postscript chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
But when you say "alone", discredited is everything you describe. Chairs. Pigeons. A staircase. Echoes. And the greatest . . . your thoughts. Keep writing, k.
skyblue-rocks chapter 1 . 3/5/2005
i like it :)
Scarlet Azalea chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
Okay THIS one I like. Very simple, yet straight to the point, using indirect language.
You're good with suggestion.
MODERNDANCER chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
awesome, I love poems that set a scene but not a story, if you know what I mean.
UnShure Dreamer chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
Wow youve written a lot of stuff! So yeah this poem..Ive noticed a lot of people like that. Its sad when everyone sees them but no one takes the time to go talk to them. I like it (Your poem not the aloneness)!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
hum loneliness...
IHavePizza chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
I like it, although I'm not sure why.
Tatsu-Dreamer chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
I like it, but I can't help but get the feeling it's not finished. Maybe it's just me but it feels like it's missing a line to bring it all together.
Melime Gues chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
I like the direct simplicity of the description. ::applause::
Much love to you n yours,
lisaslife chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
It seems kind of sad and dreary, but maybe thats just me!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
I like this one. Short and thought provoking.
KT-Me chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
Wow...That's great...Know how that person feels...Empty and ALONE o.o
Gotta go before I cry heh...
Great work!
Gavrilo Princip chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
OMG! That is actually really good! Well done mate!
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
That is just beautiful.. I do not know what to say..but beautiful.
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