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This song is written well-(I am no poet nor songwriter, so I shall give to comment on rhyming or parody or whatever) I liked it-though the part about the spider's saliva being the sea sort of grossed me out-but all in all, it was pretty good.

hey! really good poem! It has a really creative concept..and I really like the rhyming.. Good job!
~Aisatsana
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