Reviews for Little Mustang
tHe LiGhT fRoM tHe ShAdOwS chapter 2 . 2/14/2004
I like you're story, short chapters, but they are good. update soon, and keep up the good work!
Natali Williams chapter 2 . 2/14/2004
o..keep on! i can't wait to see what happened! please update soon! can u review my story "For The Best" ?
ku chapter 2 . 2/14/2004
finally you're writing something a little longer. this is well written, although the point-of-view shift from the father to the little girl was confusing at first. generally in first person you don't shift viewpoints. but that doesn't mean you can't do it.