Reviews for Existence
darqlyte chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
This one is more depressive and hopeless.

If this is your goal, you did it.


such things, should not be dwelt upon,

lest they consume you,

then ye become the willing slave

to your own decision to be,

without Hope.

God Bless

ing chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
I love the way your poems make me think. Wonderful.

Manju chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
wow, great job again. i can relate to this one.
Robert-Andrew-Frogg chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
I have to admit that my favorite part of this poem was actually 'it doesn't really matter' simply because I love the complete... complete break from that to what does matter.

it's desolate, and it sounds... I don't know, the first time I read it, the poem sounded so hopeless, especially because of the last two lines.

I liked it.
Infinity Plus One chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
This is a good poem; I think that this blank verse style reflects the state of mind in this poem... A pondering state of mind. Well done.
TheDevilLikesToDream chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
i love that line, "the person hiding beneath my skin"..."i am left in the darkness, occupying the smallest space"... nice! )
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
Nice... Thanks for reviewing my work!
ANGST LOL chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
Aww... That's beautifully written...
inca-dove chapter 1 . 2/22/2004
OH, that was really good! I think i can actually relate to it. I like, i like!
R.W. Zeppler chapter 1 . 2/22/2004
Oh, very nice work. I really enjoyed this! Good job!