Reviews for Twelve Commandments
Jasmine chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
This is so nice!
Jasmine
Moonlight Sorceress chapter 1 . 2/12/2004
Ah Hikki...very nice. A creative interpretation of something very well known. It also flows very well, it would sound good read aloud.
I've never been much good at poetry, my strengths lie elsewhere, so in this, as in avatar making, I'm in awe of your talent. :)
Keep writing, sweetheart.
~~Jamie~~
*Didn't you know it was me, given my love for pretentious fantasy names? :D
Lady of the Lilacs chapter 1 . 2/12/2004
Aww, Hikki, you rock. Seriously. I don't know if this was what was intended, but I just want to hug you now. I think that's adorable and sweet and I love you.
This is going to be a short, pathetic review, simply because I am much too tired to leave a better one.
*loves dearly*
~Amanda
kalariah chapter 1 . 2/12/2004
I really like the way you did this; it's quite excellent.
Gleechumber chapter 1 . 2/12/2004
This is absolutely fantastic!