Reviews for Drowning
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
i've feeling like this a lot lately. you stole the words out of my mouth. what can i say. beautiful work.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
i love it, cept the authors note... you got rid of the to save me? huh?
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
so true...
I think u should take out "to save me", it makes it too obvious, it's more interesting when u have to figure out the poem for yourself.
Keeper-of-promises chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
a few words with a lot of power
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 2/13/2004
Interesting poem. An interesting way to put it.