Reviews for Winter to Summer
KalliopesMuse chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
Good! I loved the first few lines. Maybe you could refrain from putting periods after each line because when I read it in my head, the sentences sound abrupt when I go from on to the other. But then again, I'm not an expert at poetry so I wouldn't know how it should be. Anyways, glad you have posted something new. There's anther great spring poem by one of my friends, Estelbain. It's called "A Long Winter's Nap". Nice work and keep writing :o)