|Reviews for Protector II|
| If Only I Knew chapter 21 . 8/21/2011
This story was nothing short of amazing. It was well thought out. It had just enough drama and action in it to make it interesting. :) I'd love to know what happens to Fenix and Aiur next, but that's up to you.
~If Only I Knew
| Jaliy chapter 21 . 4/21/2011
Nice story. I have to say though that Aiur was so frustrating. Felt like punching her more than once.
Anyways, good job!
| reader134 chapter 21 . 12/3/2010
Reading some chapters (especially those pertaining to flashbacks/ reflections) was quite a chore, because they tended to meander on senselessly.
That, coupled with the excessively flowery and descriptive language at times, made some segments of the story quite yawn-inducing.
However, your skilful command of the language is indeed admirable, especially when they aptly bring out the emotions of the characters (eg when Aiur heard of Fenix's apparent death)
Also, the final chapter seemed to be hastily done, which was quite a pity. Additionally, a short chapter on the post-war/rebel/marriage would have made the story more well-rounded.
Overall, quite a commendable effort though.
I would have given this at worst 7/10 and at best 8/10
Just my 2c worth
| TumbleWeed23 chapter 21 . 11/28/2009
ah hell. Love. Sigh. I loved it.
| I Murder on Impulse chapter 21 . 11/17/2009
I absolutely love this story!
| paper n pen chapter 21 . 10/6/2009
thank you, i really need that (bit depressy for a couple of days now)... haha
i dont know if you're still active or not but i would like you to know that you're a great writer...
| goanywhere chapter 21 . 8/1/2009
Stupid traiter perv is finally dead.
And they are finally together.
| goanywhere chapter 20 . 8/1/2009
Haydens a good friend.
| goanywhere chapter 18 . 8/1/2009
Ah. Gah. Freak. Blehh.
| goanywhere chapter 11 . 7/31/2009
I love the flashback.
| goanywhere chapter 7 . 7/31/2009
aww...good and bad situation.
he's going back, but not as himself.
but good chapter.
stupid, stupid fenix.
how could he!
bleh. good writing.
| goanywhere chapter 6 . 7/31/2009
i hate him.
i hate him.
i hate him.
malloy i mean.
but i hate him.
| goanywhere chapter 4 . 7/31/2009
this can't be good.
poor little girl.
| goanywhere chapter 3 . 7/31/2009
| goanywhere chapter 2 . 7/31/2009
i swear this chapter made me misty-eyed.
but i really like your writing.
i still hate mallor. hate. hate. hate.