Reviews for Protector II
Hotkitty chapter 4 . 10/3/2007
it wont let me review the last chapter. and it was so beautiful that im actualli on the verge of tears. normalli, i hate cheese, & rushedness, & everything being so very... abrupt. but after two years, for this fic, it just... fit. & it deserved a happy ending. no dragging. 'cause there isnt realli anything else left to say. one word. beautiful. & you've cheered me up, just like you always manage to do :P

puuuurfect angel chapter 22 . 10/3/2007
Wow, I can't believe that you actually finished this! I think I gave up hope for it months and months ago. I'm glad that you did though. It was nice to get an end to the story :)

I've been reading this with about 4 hours sleep in me, after a very long and trying day, so I'm going to do my best to give a good review that makes sense!

I like the closure you gave to a lot of the characters, although I think (think) that because the Priest didn't pronounce them man and wife, they weren't actually officially married. You need that line to end it all. Or something like that. It's one of the many things that I frequently get told about by grandparents who work in a church, and frequently tune out :p

It was nice to see some of the bad guys go down. Malloy especially! Although I have to admit that over the past 2 years I've forgotten most of what went on in the previous chapters of this story, and the whole of the first one. Unforunately, I don't have the time to reread them both right now.

And what was really great was to finally see Aiur and Fenix getting together!

I think that, despite the time you've taken off from writing this story, you've managed to capture the characters again quite well :) They seem to fit my memories of them almost perfectly. That in itself is one hell of a feat!

All in all, great story, great job! I really enjoyed them both, and thank you for ending it :)
cherrypiesizzle chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
When I have time...I'll read this...
uusernname chapter 22 . 10/2/2007
I officially love this story! After re-reading the end of the first one and the whole of this one to refresh my memory I can definitely say it was worth the wait!
Katie Valentine chapter 22 . 10/2/2007
ah what i'd give to get a guy like fenix? *melts* the emotions is so real...gosh...this story rocks! XD
Ranting Forever n Rambling On chapter 22 . 10/1/2007
Aw... -sniffle- I'm glad it was a happy ending (and Malloy died, pardon my maniacal laughter at that), but I've been thinking about it for a while. You know, it's hard to end a story. It's done, finished, and there's no more. At least, that's how I feel. Usually people want endings. They want to feel that sense of finality. Ah, I guess it's bittersweet. I'm going to miss Aiur and Fenix. Now you have no more stories you have to finish. But you must have some ideas swirling around in your head, right? Well, Kait, when you decide to write a new story, I'll be eagerly awaiting it. But you must already know that. Until then!

~Ranting a.k.a. Michelle
liz chapter 22 . 10/1/2007
Oh, my God. I nearly had a heart-attack when I saw you'd updated this. It's brilliant. I'm surprised you could return to it after so long and just...pick up like you'd never left. Simply amazing. I loved this chapter. It moved so quickly, it was like a roller-coaster. I couldn't believe it when Aiur married Malloy and then when Fenix was unmasked (finally) I was beside myself with fear. I still can't believe she found out that way! The torture Fenix endured was brutal. My heart was in my mouth. But then she came down and told him she loved him and I became insatiably happy and sad at the same time. And then Roanne - she deserved it. I'm surprised that you had Aiur play such a prominent role in Malloy's death, but the more I think about it the more I think it wouldn't have worked any other way. It's justice. And the ending! Thank you so much for ending this happily. You really had me terrified - for years literally - that it wasn't going too. I love this. It's perfect.
Callie Rose chapter 22 . 10/1/2007
aw...such a happy ending. Everyone got what they deserved.

Thank you for the closure. I really loved this story. And no matter how long you took, you never lost me as a reader.

I wish you luck on any projects you work on in the future. And tell me about them, because I am so there. lol. I've been your loyal reader for too long to give up on you. I think it's been four years now.

Keep writing.


Desert Illusion chapter 22 . 10/1/2007
*screams in the library* OMG! OMG! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU, AIUR!

I CAN'T BELIEVE you finally finished this story! It was a perfect ending, and I couldn't have wished for a better one! *hugglez you to death* Omg! I'm just so shocked! When I saw your e-mail with nothing but a "*grins*" I KNEW something was up. So I checked it out asap, and had to rea a couple chapters back to refresh my memory where the story last left off. But good Lord, Aiur! That was one hell of a showdown! I LOVED IT! "Hell and high water wouldn't be able to stop me." Oh, how I adore that line! YAY! FINALLY Molly's dead. I mean FINALLY! How many times have I begged you to kill him off, and he's finally gone! YAY! *hugs you again* God. You have no idea how happy I am to finally see a closure come to this story. Then again, judging from this may have an idea. hahaha!

Oh wow. It's been really long, hasn't it? I miss talking to you! I'm almost finished with college, and then on to Masters, but we'll have to catch up sometime later!

My class has been cancelled, and so I'm heading home right now.

Take care of yourself, Aiur, and THANK YOU SO MUCH! *hugs and kisses*

Love you!



P.S. FP says that I've reviewed for this chapter before, and so it wouldn't let me log on and leave a is that possible when you've finished this NOW! Dude! Weird people aroud here...
Monkebella chapter 20 . 10/1/2007
Ok, they wont let me review the last chapter but thank you so much for finishing it. I really needed to read the end, find closure with this story, it was such a good story too and the ending fitted the mood perfectly so dont worry about the detached feeling, it fit. I hope everything works out for you in life. Better late than never is what I say... Good luck!
krazycutiechic chapter 22 . 10/1/2007
congrats on finishing the storie, some authors dont do that, even tho it took a while, it was worth it.

I really enjoyed the story, i went back and re read some stuff, and it came back to me, great ending, really glad they did end up together :D
Aiko chapter 22 . 9/30/2007
Hi! I haven't even read the chapter but I'm reviewing now anyway. Thank you for completing this short even after two years of no updates. It's great that after such a long period of time you still considered to finish this excellent piece of work. I hate writers who don't finish their stories after they receive such great praise. Thank you Kait, thank you. Even though I haven't read the chapter, I know it will be good.

~ Biggest fan

Lauren chapter 21 . 8/25/2007
(email me back if you can with a response)

PLEASE continue this story. I read this story about a year ago and lost it but i remembered how great it was and looked it up and read it aGAIN only to find out you are discontinuing it? Please don't. This story, without a doubt, is TOP 3 on the best stories I've EVER read. Without you finishing it it becomes.. just.. another story unfinished that authors don't care to even look at.

You've had lots of committed reviewers and readers read this and looking forward to reading it. Don't quit please?

That's my thoughts, as well as MANY other people's...

Wishing it wasn't over,

atreyu love chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
Teeks chapter 21 . 6/6/2007
:( it would be nice if you could continue this story after all it has made me emotional beyond belief, it contradicts the hyperactiveness my friends noramally see. It made me cry and go aw, it wrenched at my emotions and I sincerely love it... :C poor Fenix, poor Aiur, if only the girl knew...
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