Reviews for Protector II
xXxXx chapter 21 . 7/29/2005
Please tell me the next chapter is when aiur finds out that donnian is fenix. i'm going to be so mad if she finds out AFTER the wedding!
bridgette261 chapter 21 . 7/22/2005
that's it? there's gotta be more! the more chapters the more reviews!

-Katherine
Little Mermaid chapter 21 . 7/20/2005
MAN THAT'S SUCH A TERRIBLE PLACE TO END...but he'd better go back or something i hope

hope you're having fun on your trip w/ your cousin im sure you guys are entertaining yourselves somehow

update as soon as u get backk
xraspberrykissesx chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
wowowow!i love it!and i have just started! *adds to fav. stories*
Trilightreturns chapter 21 . 7/10/2005
Girl, you better now take this story off of fictionpress. I did not spend all that time helping you for nothing; so when you get back, start typing missy. Btw, you should recognize the name from online. Couldn't use Fenix Fire b/c lately I've been reading stories which some other person has been reviewing as Fenix Fire. XD Anyways, talk to you when you get back. Have fun in France.
emeraldwriter chapter 20 . 7/3/2005
Hehe, alright! That was awesome. I can't believe I missed this update! Makes me feel horrible! I am so sorry and promise to do better at it next time!
Otabee Mox chapter 21 . 7/3/2005
haha you just have to love that ending! ;D well the story;s going on great. keep the good work.. and i feel so bad for aiur. ahdsjk. and hayden is such a great freind. i wish i had a friend like him. well. keep updating! ]
mauvais ide chapter 21 . 7/2/2005
dude, intense and totally wicked awesome! can't wait until the next chapter.
liz chapter 21 . 6/30/2005
Ah! Oh my God - how could you leave it there? And for five weeks? Argh! Don't come back and only talk French, okay? You HAVE to finish this! I love it. It was an awesome chapter. DON'T LEAVE THIS SITE!
JojoBlond chapter 21 . 6/29/2005
please, update soon! man, i really hope that Fenix goes back to the capital to be with Aiur. i love your stories, they're simply amazing, please keep it up and update soon.
Lukertin chapter 21 . 6/28/2005
wewt, loved this chapter, especially the middle and ending. Bt...The traditionalists are at war with the rebels, right? So why would one of them be telling the other everything about whats going on with the war?
FrenzyFan78 chapter 21 . 6/28/2005
YES, you should stay on ficpress. I wouldn't remember to check up on your story in any other place. And that would be sad; I would like to know how this one you have fun on your trip.
Monkebella chapter 21 . 6/28/2005
Ohh please don't leave us. I really do hope you have fun in France. That's one of my dreams, I love to travel. Well, until I can find a way to fund my trips, that's all they are, dreams. Enjoy it for all of us who are stuck here, and please don't abandon us. At least give us an ending :-(
Death Princess chapter 21 . 6/28/2005
aw thts a long time 2 wait man but ill live :p i am so excited hehe fenix betta tell aiur his true identity or at the least hayden shud know. oh there was a typo i wanted 2 point out 2 ya 'Command sat heavily on this man, and he obviously welded it responsibly and seriously.' from there its the word 'welded' unless it was spposed 2 say tht then im srry. heh. i thought this was 1 of ur best chapters oh and if u do stop writing this and take it off the site truthfully ill murder u...slowly. heh aint i nice? hah i h8 school as well well sortof i dunt hate it but its annoyin like u sed. im taking french next yr as well. im goin 2 die but spposedly the classes are gunna be smaller so we'll get more help *sigh* anyways it wasnt much of a sweet sixteen i mean i had a bludy english exa on tht day. atleast i gt my nose peirced tho haha. anyways ill shutup now and get 2 the actual proper review. i like hayden. he's probably 1 of the most less serious out of all the characters in the sense he's like kinda jokey if u get my drift. oh and the bit with angela and hayden tht was so SWEET. i agree tho wen ur a royal u cnt exctly trust any1 especially with a civil war goin on. but truthfulli aiur dosent exctli hve a very active role with her kingdom. malloy is such a moron i mean wats he playin at? even my shoe prbbli has more brains thn him. i mean if he's this scared of the group thingy now *cnt remember their nme* duz he really think he'll get the crown and beat them...hah yeh rite dream on dude. and the bit with killing all those servants was so CRUEL reminded me a bit like hitler *shudder* spasticated ignoramuses. anyways i g2g and update as soon as u can. bibi and enjoy urself if ur nt already gone by now.
Arialla chapter 21 . 6/27/2005
Yay! Dialogue! This was an amazing chapter. Did I mention that I love dialogue? Well, now you know. ) I love Hayden, too. He's awesome. D

Don't drag the don't-tell-anyone-I'm-really-Fenix thing out much longer, please? Heart you. Have fun in France!

~ Aria
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