Reviews for Ghost Girl
OdinsMun chapter 2 . 8/24/2004
Interesting and moving. I note that you have not submitted lately; I am curious as to where this is going. Did the King love her or not? Did he have other choices he could have made? Did the King try to do the right thing, or was he frightened or both? Is anger and guilt about the death what is important?
Truly, I am curious. What is happening to the Ghost Girl now? What makes her happy? What makes her laugh? There are messages here, but perhaps I am slow to see them.
Regards,
OdinsMun
Alonen E Ryscwit chapter 3 . 4/15/2004
COOL! Oh! And I updated 'Hope of the People' so you need to read it! PLEASE?
~Alonen o
Wettlewash chapter 3 . 4/11/2004
that was good, wow, 20 letters! when i embroyder stuff i work on it for aout 2 days and then start on something else!
cheeseball madness chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
very interesting story, it makes you think. its so original, i love it
tthree lil piggys chapter 3 . 4/10/2004
update update! the story seems so interesting! u havfta update soon!
i wanna find out mroe about the girl and what she really is! !
update!
update!
witchmegan chapter 2 . 2/16/2004
t was as good as the last! *claps* Can't wait to see what happens!
Wettlewash chapter 2 . 2/15/2004
I like it a lot! keep on writing!
R.N.Lockhart chapter 2 . 2/15/2004
It was...short...but it was good! :-
You'll have to excuse me...I'm very... depressed and I have no real idea why...

But it was good, I can;t wait to see what happens next! :-)
There...somthing cheery... I even smiled for you...
Which is something my parents or cousins are getting at the moment... In fact...can't seem to smile right now...
anyway, good chap. And I can't wait for the next chap!
*~*Mixed*~*
Lorelei Kayeri chapter 1 . 2/15/2004
I'm intrigued, and can't wait to see the rest of the story, want to kno what the crime the king almost comitted was... but, yes, keep up the good work! :)
R.N.Lockhart chapter 1 . 2/15/2004
Cool! :-)
So... Is Nita or Sake a new ITG? Or are both? -
*~*Mixed*~*
witchmegan chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
I thing it's very good! Keep up the good work.
Jazzie Kings chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
So far it sounds pretty good. Just one thing. I that when the nurse dies? Because if it was i think the story is moving a little too fast. but if it wasn't then this sotry is doing great and i hope you keep writing.