Reviews for The Sun
Needa S chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
Beautiful, excellent job. I love Haiku's. I hope you write more.
DarkPharaoh1666 chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
Short and small wins the race. Nice write, well done.
Benjamin Gainsborough chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
Very nice! It is very inspiring! Keep up the nice work! :D
IHJ chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
Good haiku. And I wish I was in Malaysia's humidity, right now, actually. (Yes, Fara's my sis.)
Izzy J.
Zainab chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
I like the imagery in this
fayreweill chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
beautifully written and described! do you live in the sahara? :)
PS be a nice person and help me review my stuffz. if you feel like it, that is.
Silverfire Starr chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
It's cool how your notes and poem fit together like one art piece. good job.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 2/26/2004
Well, it's always nice to know that its around when you need it burn burn! *put on sunblock lotion* much better *puts on cool shades*
Excellent job!
Never the same
Anansi Spyder chapter 1 . 2/15/2004
i think your author notes, at the beginning and end of each entry, are as unique as the poems themselves