Now this I find just plain scary!

*Shivers*

This poem is so ... sad.
there's a lot of double intendres and at first i giggled cause - who doesn't love those? But then I read the rest and I couldn't stop the feeling of dread in my stomach. It was like, so clinical.
"I open the bottle of alcohol/Douse a swab/cleanse the wound/purge the pain"
The word choice just leaves such a strong imprint. This really affected me and i think that was your purpose.
I find this very interesting and I want to post some questions but I think i'll just read it over again ... lemme just say ... really good job. The word picture was just ... great!
-Asia

Nicely done. You've got originality in here. Like it.

..this poem was rather interesting...its kool...and just very...unique...