| Reviews for Raven's Statues |
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   Darklight Shadow chapter 8 . 12/4/2005 This story is so freaky! And Braddock is so yucky! And this story is so good! |
| mistressKC chapter 8 . 9/29/2004 definitely one awesome horror story! I mean like - WOW! this was so good! the imagery, the story flow from one scene to another was real smooth, the characters, dialogues - it was just SO good ok? And I'm waiting for more so you go and update k? I feel like I'm reading one of RL STine's young adult fiction stories... well just one comment - you know how you introduced every single horrific thing that happened to the characters one by one? well that was kinda... hm... good yet redudant - you kinda introduced them all the same way so the readers more or less had an idea what was gonna happen. However this was bloody good - I'm waiting for more! |
| j.b chapter 1 . 8/28/2004 superb. Just hurry up with the next chapter! |
| Infamous Writer chapter 7 . 8/7/2004 Impressive story. Nice descriptions, characters, and setting. I hope to read more of your work. |
| BuffLie chapter 7 . 8/7/2004 "Didn’t notice when her breath began to mist, or when a single blood-red tear rolled down Nelly’s face." - Holy crap! lol. - I like it. The only thing is... which you can do nothing about... is that with stories/movies like this, where everyone is in a house with some kind of evil thing, they always stay... they don't seem to run for their lives, lol. But, if you had them leave, then there would be no story :P |
| Sombrero chapter 1 . 8/6/2004 "Nelly’s whole film was about a group of people who used one and, after a gruesome series of killings, all ended up dead" - Nelly's really creative, in't she. . . |
| BuffLie chapter 6 . 6/30/2004 Nice chapter. I like the statues coming to life bit. And... I loved - "Pissing-her-pants, shitting-a-brick terrified." :) |
| BuffLie chapter 5 . 5/17/2004 It'll be interesting to see where this all goes... finding out who or what in the house is completely psycho. I like the way it's written. A nice style. Clearing up the few grammar mistakes would make it flow even better. If you want me to point em out, I can. Just email me :) |
| Nickolaus Pacione chapter 5 . 5/16/2004 I could not tell which was you and which was your friend writing the story and in this genre when two hands are writing one story, that is really impressive. I like the way this is written and it has a feel that reminds me a little of myself when I was younger. It is nicely done, you built the horror and kept it going all the way out thru the story. You should send this out to get published - it is stronger than anything that is out there on . It is sad that T.J. Crowley ignores writers from FictionPress because they deliver as much skill as what I saw on - namely Ramsey Campbell. |
| Clodhopper chapter 1 . 4/13/2004 ooh, real good start. i like it a lot. there were a few com. splce. and snt frags but nothing too bad. interesting beginning, good characters. i like it so far ~clodhopper~ |
| Moogan chapter 1 . 3/30/2004 Oh, what an excellent story! It is truly amazin! The next chapter is comin soon,so watch this space! He he! |
| Layne R. Pendragon chapter 3 . 3/21/2004 O.o SPIFFY! lol I like this, alot. It seems so...dark. *Evil grin* Can't wait to read more! ~*~_Layne, Daughter of Flames_~*~ |
| Nickolaus Pacione chapter 3 . 3/18/2004 I liked the pacing in this one, you did a good job writing this one. I wanted to wait until I read all three chapters before I left my comment. One thing I could recommend on this one is that you expanded on your paragraphs and made them a little longer. Other than that I liked how this one is written, very creative. |
| BuffLie chapter 2 . 2/19/2004 Interesting. I'll keep an eye on it :) |
| Chelwad chapter 2 . 2/16/2004 Oh! Who is this Doyle? Good, keep writing :D |