rly good story. love it. can't wait for a sequel.

Wow, awesome job!

... I'm speechless! Ok maybe not haha! This was a great story that had me captivated to the end. The action in it kept it exciting and surprising. The whole who will I choose thing was a HUGE cliffy! It had me staring at the screen wide-eyed with anticipation! I'm not really sure who I wanted her to choose! Actually I would've wanted her to choose Cameron but he wasn't really an option later in the story. I'm not sure if Damien was the best choice for her but nevertheless it was a great story.

yes

Awesomez! update soon!

VERY NICE

ah i still really dont get it :(very confuzingbut its good :Pstill like damian , i feel like hes more into rebecca, josh sounds like he more wants a girl to go long term with him , but not "just" rebecca, prob any girl that would go long term and love him * sigh* i will stop now...(2:30am..me tired...but cant stop reading :P)

AH I DONT GET IT...ya thats all i had to say...and i thik that i like damian the best..yup... but i think that it is to late ..now that ou finished the story...ya

that chapter was very much confuzing :P

i love it..good job

Yes. Sequal.

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I loved it.

Mwahahaha I have the story printed in hardback, yes that's right it has been published on hardback book. Mwahahahah, only $5.99. Mwahahahah

i really don't think she should end up with either of them. i mean, josh is going to someway affected no matter what. but, even though she goes with Damien, josh is left girl less. mayb he'll turn gay and go with kyle... loljkjk

yay luv the story. smashing. write the sequel soon. yay!

great story!