This was nice, although you could have put in a little more romance because there was not a lot of reason for Rebecca's choice.

Damien

wo...walau...my osh, that was good...I LOVE THIS STORY!um bout the sequel thingi...i think it's a gud idea but i don't have any ideas to it. mayb its nice if u leave it dis way too...awsome lah

Aw, I liked the title, for some reason, I can't explain, it went with this story really good! _ Of course, this story/novel was really good too, I like how you ended it. _ It's really good, and you did a great job at it!

sniff..*wipes tears from eyes* i luv ur story! so cute!

*gasp* NO!It can't have finished! Never! *sobs*

I think you had better do a sequel...as for ideas...I'm at a dead loss there.

I really liked this story (even if she did end up with Damien). I'd be interested in reading a sequel, but I'm not sure where you'd go with it. If someone said something that hurt you in a review, I'm sorry. I know what it's like. I've recieved some really awful flames. Just be sure to say in an author's note that you don't want flames, and if they give them anyway... screw them. People can be mean. I hope that no one discourages you from writing. Keep up the good work.~Bridge~

hey, i just finished reading your story and please let there be a sequel! I want to know what happens between Rebecca and Damien! I wish there was more and so please conintue this story! sequel! sequel! sequel! ;) haha. okay..laters

sequel all the way. it could be about how the guys get a movie deal or whatever. damien and rebecca have ups and downs/ same with cameron and allison and josh finds a girlfriend. anyway really good story. little confused at the very end on why she picked damien but otherwise good story.

hello love ur story update soon is jsh da real person in life oh well i vote 4 JOSH n DAMIEN

I'm too tired to actually go over the story and check to find the character's ages, but I got the distinct impression that they were all 16. That's why I pointed out that the French wouldn't ever rent out a car to a minor. Even if the minor happened to be an American model. American models very rarely ever make themselves a name over here anyway. Plus, being a model doesn't mean that you're outside the law. Look at Noir Desir, the singer went to prison for a life sentence. Plus, I'm sorry, but I don't see the link between Damien having a motorcycle and them not being minors? You can legally have a motorcycle at 16, a scooter at 14.

Nice songs though. We never learnt the Christmas Tree song when I was young (and still living in England) but it is big in France and each year we sing it in German too (along with Silent Night.)

Damien please.

The author does reserve the right to have a Better Idea!

Interesting enough story, some of the things are a little unrealistic though and ought to be changed (the one that gets at me the most is the renting of the cars to minors but that isn't by far the most important.) The grammar needs to be worked on too, but other than that, it's pretty good.

Damien please.

Could only get to here tonight. Unfortunately I have no more time and need to sign off the net. I wanted to let you know that the story's interesting so far and I'll continue reading later on.

I want to vote for Damien, he's my fave at the moment.

The French wouldn't rent cars to minors, it's against the law. The French is a bit off too, see about getting it fixed. Other than that, pretty good, interesting and I hope to read the last chapter soon!

I vote Damien.