Reviews for Let Me Love You |
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![]() ![]() She should be with Josh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i vote for damian! but i love em both. if becca gets damian can i have josh? XD update soon! like the ending to this chappie. thats guna b harsh though if she has to choose over one guy. think about how the otehr one will feel! :O |
![]() ![]() ![]() Geez- that was extremely rude and selfish. Watch your "hims", "hers", "he"s, "she"s, and "his"s. Word processors don't pick up on those things and I know I have a problem sometimes too. It helps to really scour though it once or twice before posting it :) Update soon! |
![]() ![]() I'm voting for Josh. I love him. I think he's awesome. Also, I LOVE this story. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, but again there are a few typos here and there that need to be changed (most noticable was a mix up between where and wear, I don't know if that's forgiven in grad projects so I thought I don't it out). most importantly: Fear me in my Rammstein hat! (ignore me, I'm kinda hyper at the moment) |
![]() ![]() my vote is for damian! i get the feeling u want josh...hmm i still want damian! thanks...téa |
![]() ![]() I have a couple of comments to make about the story... since you want to use it as a grad project. I think that the premise is really good, and the story is going well. I just want you to be sure to go through it with a fine-toothed comb. There are a lot of typos/grammatical errors in it that detract from the story itself. Also, there are a few things that should be tweeked, like details about their modeling career and the gang fight and such. It seems to move a tad too fast, so before turning it in, I would add more detail. All in all it is a very good story, and I hope I haven't said anything mean. I just want to help you, especially if this is for a grade or something. Also... I want to cast my vote for Josh. I really think that he's the right guy for Rebecca. Keep up the good work, and put the ending up soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() JOSH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, poor Rebecca! That would totally stink if I had to do that, with what, two days left? Evil, evil man Richard is! But I am confident that my vote for Damian will help him win her heart! Lol, I really like this so far, and I hope that the next chapters come soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() btw, if you want any help with any French, just ask. I'm more than willing to help :)Damian |
![]() ![]() ![]() good keep going. i love Damian but 1/2 on Josh |
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![]() ![]() how cool.. they are going to PARIS FRANCE! ~~ooh lala.. LOLz.. hehehe update soon bcuz i want to kno what happens! |
![]() ![]() ahh! cuteness!. hahaa. too many hott boys. o0o la la. hahah. well i think Damian should win. i dunno why but he just should mmk? lol iight. perconally i think tommy should be all up in that shizat right ther but yeh know..lol. woop woop. well i think this story rocks rebecca is adorable..i love her personality. hahaha. well later. |