Reviews for Falling
mac1012 chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
Falling in love.. Yes, your poem and esp. the last lines clearly give us the truth about falling in love.. ;D

But, well, as much as it is dangerous, it is undeniable... Let's just make sure that the pit that we are falling into is not that deep; we might not be able to redeem ourselves if it's with no bottom...

Once again, keep it up! Nice job!
Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
That's a really good question. Falling isn't good at all. I like the way you take such a paradoxial saying and question it. Keep writing!~Phoenix
s m e l l . o f . r a i n chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
laughs quietly Well, I'm amused. D This made my day. Something so wonderfully simple that it can reach my mind in my current half-asleep and half-dead state, and not only that- makes me laugh as well! Very neat.
Post Apocalyptic chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
O I like this one alot. Very well written and nice flow, makes you wonder lol. Good job.
Princess of Darkness 72 chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
thats so original...and true. love can be just as hellish as it is wonderful
S2JasmineRainS2 chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
_ I love it!
nine iron chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Wow, you really have poetry built into you, lucky one you are. I hope one day I may ascend to the heights of making one of your lists, but that remains a dream, i guess I have to write somthing truly amazing. I will read all of the ones you recommened to me ( I must apologise for my spelling, this thing needs a checker, lol.) You are right it is simple but it does raise a good point for belivers, I myself may not belive but in the religious originated society we live inI guess I can extend myself to understand what is being said.
Faerunner chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Whoa. Your thoughts are so interesting. And not only that, they rhyme! ;p Wonderful writing, keep it up.
mezzie chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
this was so cool. I love the snatches of thought you present in your work, they tend to stick with me more than some poetry.
katmonkey chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
Very nice. Interesting and an awesome poem.
karla chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
Short but loved it.
Aleonic Relic chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
this is an interesting concept, we probably don't rise to love since rising is sort of like coming above something and falling is just something that happens. where we go depends on where our heart is at the time. a great poem, made me think a bit. also well written.
x A Beautiful Disaster x chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
... Hell is below.. when we fall in love, where do we go?
Amazing. I love this. Just... wow.
katylar chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
Beautiful. I can relate.
Eagleseye chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
I really like how you pick up little things and right about them!
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