...wow...that was really good - you gotta write more, plz! ;

Of course this is fiction. Isn't this ?
*The Mighty Sisto*

Hi. This is a very interesting premise - I have been toying with a similar idea based on my family's experiences - but the narrator's voice doesn't ring true for the times. It seems too much like a modern person looking back on the times. A little more work would make this a really neat narrative.