Reviews for Night Girl
Eyes Unclouded chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
Whoa! AWESOME! The beginning meandered a bit, but then the poem really got going. I love the "night girl" idea. Very nice!
xxxi chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
TOTALLY INSPIRED!
GET READY FOR A NEXT STORY!
(just wonderin is this a girl on girl relationship, kinda sounds like it)
bITTer words chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
you explain alot by useing words that are descriptive to the idea your writing about it helps u imagine what you want the readers to see
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 2/18/2004
Wow, your work has really improved here! Less typos, and, well, everything is much better! Cool! I am happy to see this! This seems to be a very deep poem, you really had something important to say here! I hope the telling helped you, if only a little.
::claps:: good job!
LordK chapter 1 . 2/18/2004
Woah... that was so deep! The "we raped me" line was an incredible unexpected twist. That was amazing!