Reviews for KnifeEdge
wounds without cause chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
I simply LOVED your poem. It is very, very amazing. A few very notable things: Chemakill: very original and awesome. Says many things about how you feel about it.

I also liked the ?/. thing. It makes the statement 'hear them' be both a question and an order.

I also really liked the "the path I choose...is straight". I wanted to punch the air in victory.

I hope this review is helpful. SxE forever!
Escapist chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
I like the word play with chemical in the first line. I like this whole thing, in fact. You have a very interesting way of writing.
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 3/23/2004
I used to be straight-edge, and then college happened and once in a great while, I'll drink a little bit. But drugs are still bad.

Anyway, I admire yor decision to be straight-edge, and no one should give you crap for doing so. They're the stupid ones.

Keep writing.

Namir Swiftpaw
Songs of sorrow chapter 1 . 2/18/2004
I havn't read anything like this before. Interesting. I like it.
S.O.S x
Lunar Wulf Gemini chapter 1 . 2/18/2004
Wow... dynamic.