|Reviews for Avoiding|
| anti-you chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
Ah! what a cool poem! good job, you know what your doing!
| FrostedTeardrop chapter 1 . 2/18/2004
Very good poem indeed. I love the line 'Learn to swim,before we drown'
| Your-Promises chapter 1 . 2/18/2004
another great poem, i like how you use a small number of words to get a powerful point across
| Songs of sorrow chapter 1 . 2/18/2004
Ouch, been there. Still there actually...
Ah well, it all sorts itself out eventually. Does that sound optimistic or just plain lazy?
Great job. Keep it up.