That was nifty. I like reviwing lots of people's stuff, in case you hadn't noticed. Anyway, I like this, how no metter what, it's always going to come back to war. That's really what human nature is, pleasure and war. So I liked the way you captured it in this poem.

Very nicely written. The word choise is good and the rhymes all seem to fit in place naturally. I especially like how you hold off on the main point till the very end, it helps give the piece a very dark tone )

this is really really nice...and i like the way it was written...much more like of an old style...you have the touch...oh and pls if you have the time...pls do review some of my poems..thanks...

truly yours...

Oh yes, how true indeed. In the words of Einstein: "I know not of what World War I will be fought with, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones." Or something along those lines. That instinct for war is our doom. Very good work, I really like it. Your words were well chosen, and your message was clear. Great!

dark and angsty, i like poetry like that. and to me, that is definitely an easier way to express myself, but i guess that just reflects my mood and personality. anyway, i like this piece a lot. the message is great, i love reading pieces on human nature, especially those critical of it, for we do have a lot of faults as humans. nice job on this piece.

I like it. Short and sweet. You knew just when to end it, and not rant on and on. Just want to ask you to please keep reading my story, I've decided to post it despite the damage it may have on my publishing chances, and make sure you tell me if YOU get published so I can get your book.

OOh!
Niccee.
This is pretty good. It's kind of creepy to think that things like war and chaos come naturally to humans; that they're part of the way our minds work. (Which I actually believe, by the way.) Good stuff. Keep it up. I really like your poems, you should keep writing and posting. I'll check them out.
Milady...
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