Reviews for Emotions
Seeing Starz chapter 8 . 3/20/2004
Out of 7 and 8 I like shame the most. Admiration has some lovely imagery but it is just not as powerful.
*Seeing Starz*
Devin-Jamie chapter 5 . 3/14/2004
You ever notices how this can happen between the best of friends?
Devin-Jamie chapter 2 . 3/14/2004
good. inspiring.
Devin-Jamie chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
I like it. Once again you did my fav thing with haikus. You changed the stanza. I like that because it's different but feels the same. V.D. (Very Descriptive)
Endless Nightmares chapter 8 . 3/13/2004
Nice one. Short, but it was strong.
Dracula Lord of the Vampires chapter 8 . 3/11/2004
All very true.
KalliopesMuse chapter 7 . 3/10/2004
I really like your word choices for this one. "Fight's the sun with stones of hate" is very effective.
KalliopesMuse chapter 3 . 3/10/2004
Haunting black abyss... *shivers*. Nice choice of words.
KalliopesMuse chapter 2 . 3/10/2004
I have a feeling i've read these before and didn't get a chance to review. again, the last line was neat - "Bleeds across a crimson sky."
KalliopesMuse chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
Okay since you reviewed my attempt at a haiku collection, I'll read yours :) I like the last line of the this one.
Endless Nightmares chapter 7 . 3/8/2004
Interesting, and very good.
Whispers In Silence
Endless Nightmares chapter 6 . 3/8/2004
Seems like someone is spending endless hours at the beach.
Nice job!
Whispers In Silence
Endless Nightmares chapter 5 . 3/8/2004
SHort, but to the point.
Nice job!
Whispers In Silence
Endless Nightmares chapter 4 . 3/8/2004
Dang, well done!
Very good!
Whispers In Silence
Endless Nightmares chapter 3 . 3/8/2004
I liked it. Endless falling, how eerie.
Great job!
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