Reviews for Three Syllables |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That describes exactly how I feel right now! I hate rejection, one of the cruelest things in the world! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God...That was wonderful! I seriously love your writing style and you have a gift for writing it right...that sounded weird o.O. Good job.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again with the meter and the rhythm. But I like it. It's what you want to say, in a simple way. If you need help with rhymes, try It is god. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First- i don't like your ending at all. But o my god, the rest was the best bit of poetry i've read in a long time! Nice work your poetry is THE VERY BEST! -lunelapis |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am in a way kinda a hopeless romantic so I really understand this... ANNA |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing. You word choice is awesome, and your words flow so well! I'm jealous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This poem is so good, so full of emotion, it made me want to cry...I'm hooked on your poems so I am going to add you as one of my favourite authors. _ Keep up the writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome... cna I put it on my wall? I put lyrics and poems that I like on my walls, it keeps me occupied and then I can read them all the time, it's great... whoever this girl is, she should read that... And thanks for adding me on your fav authors list, it means a lot... As for your review to my poem "Dolly"... show an intelligence, like to read, write, work and they categorize you. And if you wear glasses, you're finished off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It has a very fitting title, and conveys how hard only a few words are to speak. You also describe the aftermath of your query. Overall a good poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was really good. You seem like a good guy. Whatever girl rejected you, maybe she should rethink it. Keep it up, I wanna read more of your poetry -Em |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMg, this mad me sad. I really feel for you. I'm sorry that happened...really...I can totally identify...Love hurts...really bad...you're a good writer! You really need to keep writing you're good! |