Reviews for Polish
Kelpylion chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
oh, like the metaphor of the first line, especially. fun haiku!
Lowell Boston chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
Well done! I'm not sure what the strict criteria on a haiku is, so I can not say if you're meeting the syllable requirement for each line, but I would drop angry in the second line and place it in the first and change impatient to impatiently. This way you have three beats on the first line, two on the second, and three on the third. Take this only as a suggestion. Thanks for posting.
Lowell