the plot of this story is actually good, but you spoiled it by focusing your writing not on your two supposed protagonists but four or six couples which there were. it takes away the readers' attention from the main storyline which is supposed to be going on here - that which is about nicholas and kathy. maybe this is because its difficult for you to separate from all your other characters but it really is annoying for me to read about all of them when this story is about nicholas and kathy. it would have been better if you made separate sequels for the other couples instead of throwing it all in here.

FANTASTIC STORY.

I can read a good story in about an hour. However, the sequeal to my favorite story is painfully slow for me to read. It packed with a beautiful romanctic twist and mystery- missing a minute of it would be a disappointed. now, im on chappie 13, and think, "the fourth hour." this is 4th hours online and still- reading. i've neglected the rest of my family for this booK!

Just had to say I loved this story. I really like Kathleen and Nicholas. I think because I'd already read another story with all the other characters in it...I especially enjoyed seeing a new one develop, as well as the older ones strengthen. And Brad Pitt is gorgeous so Nick must be too... what gets me a little is how good-looking Brad Pitt is when he's even older than my own mother. Just thinking that for me seems kinda wrong, but I don't know who WOULDN'T find Brad Pitt attractive. Okay, enough about him... your ideas in your stories just seem so original and I love that. Keep up the good work.

YAY, loved the ending... a third one? really? you guys are my fav people ever! i can't wait! YIPPY!okay, that made my day. okay, stop reading my review and start writing! lol

AH almost finished... i can't believe it! i hate that good things must come to an end, and both of these books have been a very good thing... ah! no fair! oh well... as long as you promise to continue to write stories i'm okay... Both of the Rippled Affect books were wonderful, and brilliantly written. thank you so much for the adventure!~pen

first... this was such a sweet chapter... i think it was my fav so far for this story... i LOVED itsecond, i like the story idea... can't wait to read!

as usual, i loved it. sorry it's taken me a while to review... i'm gonna try to get the next chapter in tonight.

This took me a long time to read, but I managed. All I can say is...wow. I am speechless. I realy love your writing style. Thanks for reviewing my story. U rule!

COrse ill stay 4 the 3 installment, i love you guys too much ;)! THe family tree help lots too! thanx~Mags

Yeah that helps alot! I'm so thrilled to know that there's going to be a third! I never want to see these characters go, I love them too much.

NOO! its the end? my gosh, the endings so sad: THEY'RE ALL GROWING OLD! NO! I love Aimee n' Logan and Brett n' Emily and they're always young when we picture them now their OLD? NO! ahahaha...i'd love to read the new one on their kids! keep it up, you dont know how much entertainment this story has been for me ever since i found out about it! LOVE YOU GUYS!~mags

completely in love with your series...its great. do u think u can make a family tree or something though? im a bit confused about whos related to who

glad everything didn't come out perfect...pretty cute, be a little more realistic if all the kids weren't that close, like sure,the parents want them to be best friends but how realistic is that?sorry no major criticism intended, love reading it all can't wait for the next bit!

They truly are the perfect couple. I wish every girl could find a guy like nick. Alas! such is not the case. Anyway, I just want to say thanks for putting all your time and effort into this story to finish it. I love every single bit of it. I also want to thank u for not putting a sex scene in this chapter. Those scenes make me very uncomfortable and I'm glad u didn't put one in.