Reviews for Another Mistake
Joflower chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
o... I like it. The song fits really well with the situation you have chosen to write about.
Good job!
Ishuzu chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Wow...
I really enjoyed this work. Very nice. I liked how you implemented the song into the right parts of the story. _ It was extremely well written.
~Ishuzu
Sokorra Lewis chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
That is really good! I am also a fan of the Amara period, although I am a fan of Ancient Egypt all together. I enjoyed your fic. I liked how you connected the family relations instead of changing them like some people do.
I am actually writing a Tut story, although mine is set back when Tut was 9 and being announced as Pharaoh. I liked how your story saw the relationship between Tut and his half-sister is clsoe to what I felt they had:)
Kori
lucidscreamer chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
This is pretty good. :) I did stumble over the "mold a statue" metaphor, as most statues are not molded, but rather are sculpted. Still, it's a minor quibble. Thanks for an interesting read.