wow this is really good, i loved the last few lines.

This is got to be one of my favourite poems.

i really like this, nice job. i enjoyed the contradictory lines in the beginning half, but i liked the message much more at the end. and thanks for reviewing my poems, i appreciate that you gave some insight on them.

wow, i thought from the summary this might be slightly humourous, but it's not, it's actually pure poetry, and i love it, great job, thank you for sharing and thanx for the reivew