Reviews for In The Room With Dirty Floors
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
I know this isnt a true story but for it not to be it is very well written. Please keep up the good work in your writing, this is very good and though it's not graphic, the word detail gives great meaning to the poem.
Avarechor chapter 1 . 2/24/2004
Very emotional and i can sense the unforgetable pain the character in the poem is feeling. Something so terrible is too hard to try wipe away. A brilliant poem.
mazasuki chapter 1 . 2/22/2004
I like the way you did this poem, but I can't find a definite rhythm to it. That's just a pet peeve of mine though, otherwise, very nice.
lostrunner chapter 1 . 2/22/2004
There where lines in this poem that sort of slowed down the flow a bit, but you picked that up in your last line; which was good. The last line flowed with the same rhythm as your first line and it sort of put everything together. Good job.
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 2/22/2004
Depicting the power of how emotion can really fuck a person up. It's horrible to be human sometimes...
Good work.