|Reviews for 6 months|
| JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
The two last stanzas were pretty good, but I liked the fourth the best. Everything flowed very well also. Good job!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
oo i actaully love the last two stanzas its unexpected and it makes the poem more serious... great poem and nice repition