Reviews for Vaelis
Quid chapter 17 . 8/3/2004
Wow, really good story. It had some spelling errors and some parts didn't sound quite right, but all in all very impressing!
Kaitlyn Chelsea chapter 2 . 7/6/2004
wow, this is a really good story. i haven't even read everything that you posted and i'm already hooked. can't wait to read the rest, keep up the good work.
Mychael Lynne chapter 17 . 3/12/2004
that's a really good story. me like :)
Mychael Lynne chapter 14 . 3/6/2004
great story! keep it up!
Me chapter 3 . 3/1/2004
This is a very well written story, and I realize that there are more chapters than what I have read so far, but it really shouldn't be a PG rating. Considering the murder, some people might not think it's an appropriate you raise the rating, you should also put WHY. Other than that, though, I really like this story. It has AMAZING potential.
K.A. Rosa chapter 5 . 2/26/2004
Wow! Awesome story! Can't wait for the next installment!
AryaWinds chapter 3 . 2/24/2004
I'm confused, but this is a good story, and it's very interesting so far. A bit sad, but interesting enough. Update!