Reviews for Breathe in, Breathe out
kirsten was chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
that was so adorable! i loved it
Verdi chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
excellent descriptions, very vivid
Yep it's just me chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
Very nice!
Renzie chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
I loved this one :D Amazing one-shot! There's not much more I can say, but wow! Great job 3
Nikkole15 chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Love it! *Claps* Bravo! Yay! Keep up the good work! Cna't wait for the next chapter!


GeorgyannWayson chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
Oh, my god...I am like crying...That was so good!

-"What's a good story without a good review? Reviews Captain Smallie's Crew's stories!"

Tortugapoet chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
Wow, this is a beautiful story. I wish you would write more! But it's been a year and more since you posted this. I want to know more about the setting and have character development! I love it. Write more? Please? Hee. -Drea
Jameela chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
holy crap,This fic is an absolute beauty.
asdfghjklkjh chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
I really like this story. The beginning especailly, the description is beautiful, you have a real way with words. Update please!
umbrius chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
JOE: Sorry we haven't reviewed in so long.

KYR: Yes, we apologize.

JOE: NEway, this is interesting, a segment of a love story...

KYR: ...that we think you should add to. It is very well written.

JOE: Oh yeah, and thanks for the review, I wish I had more time to write...and a little more interest. At the moment, I have to work on programming and getting ready to move.

KYR: Yes, we finally get to move into our own place.

BOTH: AND WE GET OUR OWN COMPUTER SOON TOO! Bye, we'll try to review some more soon...
darqlyte chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
This was one of my early stories I read and one my of favortie short stories.

I like it alot, it's very romantic without being explicit.

You did a great job on it.

If you like poetry you can check out some of my other stuff, if you want.

Again, great story, I really like it, you should publish it, if possible.

God Bless.

-Blaeyk Q'ohle Darqlyte
Lil Bazza chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Are you going to continue? Cause I really want you to, but you don't have to. I like the story, and the setting (though you don't know much about where they are in relation to the world and stuff) and I can't wait to see it continue.
sweet hunny chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
aw..the ending is so sweet. i love this story. bittersweet endings always get me.:)
Twizzlers chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Wow, that was excellent! I really enjoyed reading that. I really liked the setting and how it wasn't made clear, but you could get an exact picture of what everything looked like anyways. You're an awesome writer and I really think you could go somewhere with it. I've read novels that weren't this good. : ) I'm gonna go see if you have anything else I can read now. Keep writing stories as good as this one! Twizz
ashL chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
omg thats a great story...u are a really great writter and should keep on writtin...good luck! - ashley
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