Reviews for Remedy
Charlottes-pen chapter 16 . 10/18/2004
Hey, sorry for taking so long to review, I thought I had, but I guess not. I like the story, the plot moves a bit fast, but your way of telling a story and the words are just beautiful. I especially loved the way you told about the sunset in Bluntly Bittersweet. It was just so beautiful. Keep it up
Romina chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
hey i really like the prolgue totally true your a great arthour and i hope to see one of your books on the shelf one day.
Romina chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
hey i really like the prolgue totally true your a great arthour and i hope to see one of your books on the shelf one day.
Romina chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
hey i really like the prolgue totally true your a great arthour and i hope to see one of your books on the shelf one day.
Romina chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
hey i really like the prolgue totally true your a great arthour and i hope to see one of your books on the shelf one day.
escapevelocityo2 chapter 14 . 9/2/2004
I'm in love with your writing. Its so genuine and unique. Excellent word choice and imagery, It almost made me cry ...
Keep writing, Im your biggest fan!
~Lana
SanitysOverrated87 chapter 4 . 8/30/2004
I dont have time to read past this tonight but what i have read so far i like. It keeps you wanting to continue. I will definately be coming back to finish it. The last line of this chapter is absolutely great. It really shows her pain with out using cliches. I love it!
David Paine chapter 4 . 6/17/2004
Interesting story. Might want to work on longer chapters and brush up on some grammar - other than that, fantastic.
lana chapter 14 . 4/26/2004
oh so you wanna write half a story like that but not half a story with me? you know the whole natalie/ dakota thing!
Leave it to you to turn me down.
ps. im not angry just weird how u said it so plz explain ...
freedman121 chapter 14 . 4/14/2004
Huh.. I wonder who that is!
Great chapter anyhoo.
Freedman
Liz chapter 14 . 4/13/2004
Oh mi god what?
UGH! leave us in suspense like that
dude, update now!
right now !
you cant make ur chapters 2 pages and then update every 2 weeks , that's just mean!
um.. Im guessing its Aden in there doing ...
He really needs to get a life, like get out of the little BAA circle and get himself some normal girl..who is at least legal?
ya, update soon!
rustupidorjustnotbright chapter 14 . 4/12/2004
you realy need to make your chapters longer, so readers can find out what happens. anyways I like it.
Romina chapter 13 . 4/10/2004
OMG this is one book that has to get pulished. It totally describes reality and the morals of life.
deletemyaccount2012 chapter 13 . 4/4/2004
I'm hooked on this story. It's fantastic.
Someone Named Eumi chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
You, miss, have talent. Captivating writing style. Keep writing. I'm already a fan.
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