Reviews for A Pain
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
it's more powerful when it's a secret cos you're taking so hard to hide it. the first stanza was interesting. but the second must need more work.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
yes very similar but different. cool!
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
Secret pain is usually even more powerful than pain that we release cuz when we release pain we can sometimes get rid of it, but secret pain is always within us. I don't think the poem's really great but it has a good message.
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
This poem is really powerful. Great work.
Spo0ky42 chapter 1 . 2/27/2004
I really liked that poem. It was short but it got the point across, and it didn't need to be any longer. I love the interesting technique you used! Great job!
PS: Thanks for reviewing my poem :)