Reviews for Believe
poisonous chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
I thought the lines fit good together. I really like how you wrote it, showing the insecurities of the other person. :)
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
i liked tihs. was well thought out. i gotta get off now but i wanted to review at least one thing in return right now to say thanks for all the reviews recently. and that i shall be returning when i have time to review more of your stuff. also im hoping this wekeend i can write something and post. hopefully. but yeah. this wekeend i shall be (dammit spelld weekend wrong 2x!) coming tor eview more. wanted to say thanks and sorry i cant spell, lol! ;)
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 2/26/2004
Beautiful. Love the ending.
HideAwayFairy chapter 1 . 2/25/2004
Aw, that is so sweet. Two really good poems from one phrase, wow, that's wicked.
flowerthief chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
Yea, I think you should make two seperate poems out of this. I think if you made each one a little longer they would be nice, great beginnings.