Reviews for Perfect World
Shadowz the Silver Wolf chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
very nice and very sweet. I like it very much
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
hum very nice! :D
AroseFORtheDEAD chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
thats awsome thats great its so nice that is the perfect world
bleak nights in tokyo chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
"When I woke up next to you
The world became perfect"
Hehe, that's cute.
Forever Foreign chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
wow you really make the best out of school assignments! at least that makes 1 of us...
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
really powerful ending.
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 2/27/2004
Splendid. Loved the ending. A really loving poem. We don't get a lot of those these days.
HideAwayFairy chapter 1 . 2/25/2004
Wow, that is a really good poem (thanx for the reveiws) I agree with kikki, don't listen to what those people say, they're idiots and don't know good talent when they see it. Keep on writing!
flowerthief chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
Seems like your doing well in that class. I wish I signed up for a creative writing class. Sounds like fun.
kikki07 chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
don't listen to the bad stuff that people say, i like your poems. mine don't rhyme either so your not alone, and you shouldn't kill yourself cause your wanted on this earth, who wants you you ask? me i need you here and so does your family and friends. so don't leave. please. keep writting!
p.s. you should read my "why do they" poem